tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6401327955096478101.post6463065922102050734..comments2014-06-03T02:49:38.235-07:00Comments on My Ordinary Teenage Life.: In the middleChrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15437053415930149004noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6401327955096478101.post-31976964226109171552010-08-15T09:37:24.543-07:002010-08-15T09:37:24.543-07:00Haha, yes I guess I should keep in mine that your ...Haha, yes I guess I should keep in mine that your writing it down while it's in your head so everything isn't very clear yet. Right now it sounds as if your story is undeveloped which it is, guess I'm thinking to far ahead. Good point with the Gonzo journalism, eh perhaps make it more like a novel in your writing. Crap like "in a odd voice that scared Ben even". Looking forward to reading the second draft soon, I'll try to think more clearly before writing my thoughts on it. :DRyanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06116622147983543152noreply@blogger.com